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beginning of my PS
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"Since taking on Business Studies for GCSE I have been fascinated with the way the world works in regards to businesses. This interest and the desire to learn more has made me want to study Business and Economics. Economics is the study of incentives, without which the world would not be the place it is today."

This is the start of my statement, im not happy with it, can anyone give me any help?
im applying for business economics at Liverpool, Lufboro, UEA, Reading, Exeter and Oxford BrookesToungue
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