Hello,
my teacher needs a handout from the beginning of my latest presentation. Can someone have a closer look for spelling and gramatical mistakes in my text? Hints for a good style are also welcome.
I would be happy for any advice you can give.
Thank you very much.

Here is the text:
Good morning. First of all, I would like to thank you all for being here today. For those who don’t know me, my name is Peter and I am studying mechatronics in the third semester. In my presentation I like to familiarize you with the AIBO robot dog distributed by Sony.
At first let us have a closer look what will expect you within the next ten minutes. I will focus on five major issues.
Firstly, I will give you a little introduction about the basic features of the robot. This overview will be followed by a short résumé about the robot’s history. After that we will have a closer look at technical details like sensors, actors, software and abilities of the robot. This leads directly in to my next point: the outlook to future prospects. To put it all in a nutshell, I will repeat the major issues summarized briefly in a conclusion. I would be grateful if you would hold your questions till the end. At the end I’ll be happy to answer any question you may have.
If that’s okay with all of you, I will begin with my first point.
AIBO is Japanese for “friend” or “partner”, but is also stands for “Artificial Intelligence Robot”. When the development began, the basic goal was to design a robot dog for allergy sufferer. But the target group for AIBO was much bigger. Sony did a lot of research in the field of robotics and opened up a new market for pet-like robots. The robot should be able to interact with humans.  Today the AIBO is the most modern robot dog available on the market.
This brings me to the end of my first point and leads directly to the robots development beginning in 1999. Here you can see a picture of the first prototype. As you can see, it is just an electronic circuit without any chassis. The technology was innovative and seemed to be reliable, so that a chassis was designed in the same year. A first line of 3000 robots were manufactured at the end of 1999. They were distributed over the internet and sold out after 18 minutes…

Thanks a lot for reading and correcting.
Have a nice day,
-Peter (Peter-17@gmx.de)

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