im the author and havnt put my id on this one kathleen leach any replies you can send to me greatly appreciated

I wouldn't use any cliches ('get my teeth into') and you might want to check your spelling also ('computer litarate').

As well, I wouldn't say that you wanted the course because it was close to home. It makes it sound like you're just picking that Uni cos it's near you, which won't impress.

Dziecko