Hi, Ive finished my really rough draft for my Business managementpersonal statement, and was wondering if anyone is willing to review it?
If so can you give me ur e-mail so I can send it?><
Thanks

willow_62000@yahoo.co.uk

You've put it up in the PSR, so I'll take a look at it later this evening, and hopefully some of the other reviewers will as well. Really personal statements should only go on the PSR and should not be emailed to other members, but as I haven't written the bit to ask people other than reviewers to use it that's fine.

Me and Willa have both commented on yours on the PSR. Have a look at it and respond to our comments.