Hi, i'm really want to apply for a course in international relations in the uk, and if anyone could give me any suggestions on how to improve my personal statement to improve my chances, I will be really grateful!

I'm not sure whether I am allowed to post my personal statement in its entirety here, so if anyone is willing to help, I will be more than willing to send you a copy!

Send a copy to me and I'll take a look. I've already done my personal statement and applied for Mathematics. So there's no need to worry.

London School of Economics and Political Science, one of the world's leading social science institutions, and to the International Relations (IR) Department. The Department has about 500 students in any given year, drawn from more than 30 countries. There are approximately 200 undergraduate students, the majority of whom are on the three years of the Bachelor in Science IR program, and the remainder on the one-year General Course.